Wrote a new short story today as well (flash fiction actually) called Dear Ms Moon. I'm certain the write slow project helped me be in the flow that generated that. Thanks must also go to Italo Calvino for Dear Ms Moon.

Less editing today so I've only included the last 3 paragraphs, everything else remains unchanged.

( Her mind had been fragmented by the fall and scattered as it was into pieces of fluttering confetti or thistle down saw many things, touched many things and, lips to tongue, unlike any before or after, Mel spoke of what those fragments touched. )